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Problems, Solutions and Linking Words

Study this page to learn more about linking words, problems and solutions.

Paragraph Structure

     When you write a paragraph, your first sentence is your topic sentence. After that, you have a supporting point and an example. Perhaps you have several supporting points and examples. Finally, you have a concluding sentence that sums up the entire paragraph.

           Paragraph Structure
Essay Structure

     When you write an essay, you start with an introduction where you introduce the topic and clearly say what you will write about.

     Here you write your first body paragraph. You should follow a normal paragraph structure. 

    Follow the same paragraph structure for the following body paragraphs in your essay.You can write as many paragraphs as you like.

    In your conclusion, you summarise what you wrote about. You can also add a final personal comment or recommendation.

If you change the topic in your essay, you must use transition signal to help the reader. 

 

Using many different transition signals makes it easier for the reader to understand the different topics.

 

Click on the blue link to learn more about transition signals.

 

 

Transition Signals  - the Glue of your Writing

 

Study this short presentation to learn more about how to write an essay about problems and solutions.

 

 

 
Practice What You Have Learnt
 

Write a short essay (200 words) about problems and solutions in Iraq. Write different transition signals in bold.

                           Solutions for the Sunni and Shia Conflict
By Dastan (Ed.)
 

     After 2003, a new conflict has arisen in Iraq, which is the conflict between Sunni and Shia Muslims. In this short essay, I will talk about this conflict and offer three solutions to minimize it.

 

     In my opinion, the first solution for this conflict is to make people listen to each other. If they listen to each other and talk about their problems, they can easily understand why they fight and realise the damage of their conflict. In contrast, they cannot find a solution for their problem, and they cannot feel the harm they do to each other when they are in battle with each other.

 

     Another solution for this battle is building peace between people in many ways. For example, many times love was a great solution for this problem. When a Sunni boy got married to a Shia girl, the battle stopped between those two different families.

 

     Teaching students in school how we can live peacefully in the same country is a third solution to the problem. For instance, we can teach students how to communicate without using violence, so we can solve conflicts without offending or killing each other.

 

     In brief, there are solutions which can solve the conflict between Sunni and Shia Muslims, but the important point is that people must realise the high price of this conflict. Otherwise,  they will never know peace. 

Balance your Essay!
Introduction (10%)
Body Paragraphs (80%)
Conclusion (10%)
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